Ah, another one managed to be done~
Before I comment, I wish to show some gratefulness for
so, I'll give a bow and a clap for what I am about to see.
And enough of my sillyness- on to the comic.

This is more serious and slightly "darker" if so to put it, than some of the other strips that has been posted in the Dear You series.
It's good to take a note of that, for the change in the whole comic.
I've more or less commented on this in then note I sent you,
but I'll try my best to comment on this one as well.

Love the shading, it really makes a difference when you shade something in a comic. Each panel, more or less get's more realistic and you got a new feeling
to the whole process and what's happening.
So it's good to hear that you'll keep it up.
A, yes, the plot to the whole serie, was the word I was looking for.
To see the changes, good or bad, it's how to keep one person interested.
Some may not like the ideas, and some may love them.
Good thing we all have different tastes, eh?

Good thing you went for the more realistic reaction from Hina Ichigo.
Even tough she's a child, you know she has just as much emotions than those older than her and she's not dumb either.
When it comes to ones emotions, no matter how confused some may be.
you just have that one feeling that you can be sure of.
That's what I like about Hina Ichigo in the version you draw her like.
It's seeing a character in a whole new light. ~

It's come this far, and I cannot wait for what'll happen next. Specially on how Souseiseki will handle this and of course, the reaction.
Oh, why must I be so in eager to see what happens next? *giggles slightly*
Nah, it's a good thing, trust me. ^^
Oh yeah, some ending words;

What is more realastic for a character to react in such a situation?
So it's the best choise, more likely than unlikely.
Good job once more- I will wait patient for the next strip to come.
No matter how the ending to this all will be, I'll be sure to wait for it.

Thanks again for a good strip! <3

(AH! I managed to comment! Yes! )

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If people like you are going to Heaven, I'd rather be in Hell.

Btw; Noticed those "tentacels" as my brother so nicely put it,
at the last panel there. Oh dear oh dear, what is the next to happen?`
*Waits in eager* ~ Even my kid brother is waiting now. :3

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If people like you are going to Heaven, I'd rather be in Hell.

Oh my, I only noticed the comment now... Dear me... ^^'

Ah, yes, yes, the 'tentacles'... *smile*
I think this is a surprise you will like alot... ^^

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... Now I've lost it.